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Your character description is exactly what the name implies: a physical description of what another player can see when they look at you. Think of it as a photograph. | Your character description is exactly what the name implies: a physical description of what another player can see when they look at you. Think of it as a photograph. | ||
===What does a photograph show you?=== | |||
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* age | * age | ||
===What a photograph does not show=== | |||
<nowiki>* </nowiki>It cannot show what you are thinking, only an impression which some may or may NOT see. Including in your description a thought or characteristic (i.e. Aeana thinks everyone around her is inferior) falls under forced emotes or reactions, which is usually considered a BAD thing.<br> | <nowiki>* </nowiki>It cannot show what you are thinking, only an impression which some may or may NOT see. Including in your description a thought or characteristic (i.e. Aeana thinks everyone around her is inferior) falls under forced emotes or reactions, which is usually considered a BAD thing.<br> | ||
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<nowiki>*** </nowiki>It will not show your shardic rank, the history of a tattoo or its significance, or how you got a scar. | <nowiki>*** </nowiki>It will not show your shardic rank, the history of a tattoo or its significance, or how you got a scar. | ||
===Some examples of good descriptions=== | |||
* ''A petite, young woman with long blonde hair drawn up into a pony tail. She is simply dressed in a short skirt and top of matching plum. Her left hand strays and twitches above her blade as her blue eyes move constantly around the room. The young woman's face is drawn up into a haughty expression.'' | * ''A petite, young woman with long blonde hair drawn up into a pony tail. She is simply dressed in a short skirt and top of matching plum. Her left hand strays and twitches above her blade as her blue eyes move constantly around the room. The young woman's face is drawn up into a haughty expression.'' | ||
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* ''An old man looks out at the room from beneath a hooded cloak, his eyes a pale blue. His hands are mottled with age where they clutch the staff at his right side. A few wisps of sliver hair glint from under the cloak as he gazes about the room restlessly with a grim expression.'' | * ''An old man looks out at the room from beneath a hooded cloak, his eyes a pale blue. His hands are mottled with age where they clutch the staff at his right side. A few wisps of sliver hair glint from under the cloak as he gazes about the room restlessly with a grim expression.'' | ||
===Some examples of bad descriptions and some of the points wrong with them=== | |||
* ''Princess Emmeretta of the ninth house of Rakaz gazes around at the lowly peons before her, her eyes making all looking at her automatically bow before her divine presence. Her diadem of the 9th house shows her worth and how far above all others she is.'' | * ''Princess Emmeretta of the ninth house of Rakaz gazes around at the lowly peons before her, her eyes making all looking at her automatically bow before her divine presence. Her diadem of the 9th house shows her worth and how far above all others she is.'' | ||
Revision as of 16:40, 13 September 2007
First
If you have not yet done so, read the "Emoting" section on the page named A Guide to Dreaming. This guide is intended to address more specific rules and suggestions as well as less common, though not less annoying, faux pas.
Basic Principles
Character descriptions fall under the same creative category as emoting because like actions, character descriptions can only communicate what you see. If you learn to create a good description, learning proper emoting will come naturally.
Your character description is exactly what the name implies: a physical description of what another player can see when they look at you. Think of it as a photograph.
What does a photograph show you?
- hair colour
- skin tone
- eye colour
- scars, tattoos, obvious physical imperfections (uncovered ones)***
- facial/bodily expression*
- posture/bearing (hunched, noble, shady, etc.)***
- clothing (style, cut, material, colours, emblems)**
- weapons**
- jewelery**
- wear and tear
- cleanliness or not
- age
What a photograph does not show
* It cannot show what you are thinking, only an impression which some may or may NOT see. Including in your description a thought or characteristic (i.e. Aeana thinks everyone around her is inferior) falls under forced emotes or reactions, which is usually considered a BAD thing.
** While a weapon, uniform, tiara, ring, family crest, and or emblem, for example, might mean something on your shard, and you choose to find your way into the dream while wearing them, they mean nothing to others unless they have obvious wording like a name (such as engraved on the hilt of a sword). Though people can observe such things as a crest, no one will know its significance unless you openly TELL them. Therefore, the description: "his family crest is patched onto his shoulder" is not appropriate.
*** It will not show your shardic rank, the history of a tattoo or its significance, or how you got a scar.
Some examples of good descriptions
- A petite, young woman with long blonde hair drawn up into a pony tail. She is simply dressed in a short skirt and top of matching plum. Her left hand strays and twitches above her blade as her blue eyes move constantly around the room. The young woman's face is drawn up into a haughty expression.
- An old man looks out at the room from beneath a hooded cloak, his eyes a pale blue. His hands are mottled with age where they clutch the staff at his right side. A few wisps of sliver hair glint from under the cloak as he gazes about the room restlessly with a grim expression.
Some examples of bad descriptions and some of the points wrong with them
- Princess Emmeretta of the ninth house of Rakaz gazes around at the lowly peons before her, her eyes making all looking at her automatically bow before her divine presence. Her diadem of the 9th house shows her worth and how far above all others she is.
- How do we know she's a princess of the 9th house etc? Who really cares?
- She might think we are peons, but that would require us to read her mind.
- Automatically bowing is a forced emote. If I'm going to bow it will be because I want to, not because someone decided to put it in their description that I did!
- "Divine prescence..." Maybe in her mind, but that has yet to be proven.
- "Diadem of the 9th house?" "Her worth?" "Above others?" Yet again subjective to her own thoughts and not how others perceive her.
- Jake the scoundrel looks at all around him, eyeing them as if he was sizing them up for what was in their pockets and causing the others to move away from him.
- "Jake the scoundrel." How could we instantly know his name? We couldn't unless we ask... that darn telepathy again I guess...
- "As if he was sizing people up..." If any description or emote requires "as if" before it, you are probably flirting with forced emoting.
- "Causing others..." Yet another forced action on others. A character will not shy away from another unless they choose to.
- "he looks about the room, his gaze causing a cold chill to cross your heart! he is your master and you know it! he towers above all others! his eyes stare out from a completely tattooed body"
> cold chill .. subjective > master? and i know it?! .. great way to pick a fight and to make me say... okay buddy your hugme white jacket is right over there... > towers above all others?! yet again forcing something on everyone else... you want to be tall? say he's 7' tall.. but don't assume that everyone is a runt to you.. share the height! > completely tattooed body? damn that was a really close nude inspection of another character i don't remember doing... what did i miss?!!
Emotes
In a roleplaying environment, they can make or break you.
Good emotes are ones that describe actions:
chuckles softly growls deep in her throat collapses heavily to one knee as the blood drains from his flesh, his face turning chalk white. dances around a look of happiness on her face as she smiles to those around her grins widely at bob, raising a hand to cover the grin quickly snickers as she turns and whispers softly to bob "oh, that was a lovely joke!" looks sharply at joe, his features frozen with shock cries out in pain and horror "NO!"
boring emotes are ones that are usually one liners: (yes i am guilty of them too!)
laughs cries sniffles smirks > is it really that hard to write a few lines more?
bad emotes are ones that force actions on others: (my favourites has always been the telepathy ones...)
sneers at buffy thinking she's an idiot.. >you know if those are the kinda thoughts you can come up with.. don't force me to read your mind.. please!
walks into the room making everyone look at him > sorry buddy no matter how you try.. you cannot force me, even with toothpicks!
bonks joe on the head making him collapse at his feet and beg him to stop > you can bonk joe on the head... but if he collapses or begs.. it's up to him..
and last and not least.. the most evil of all things in a true RP game.... EMOTICONS!
THERE ARE NO "GOOD" ONES ONLY, BAD.. VERY, VERY BAD ONES! they do not belong in this type of game where you can emote and talk, please leave them at the portal! personally i preffer not to rp with those that use them, to me they are not even trying... and no i am not talking about new players who do not understand or the occsaional slip-up...
